Obviously, this is the first time I've played him anywhere, so any and all concrit would be just awesome. What, if anything, am I doing wrong? What can I fix? What can I do better?
I also have a concrit post here (http://livesbyinstinct.livejournal.com/808.html?mode=reply) if you would prefer to use that. Comments are screened, anon posting is on, IP logging is off.
Kiba Inuzuka - Naruto
Obviously, this is the first time I've played him anywhere, so any and all concrit would be just awesome. What, if anything, am I doing wrong? What can I fix? What can I do better?
I also have a concrit post here (http://livesbyinstinct.livejournal.com/808.html?mode=reply) if you would prefer to use that. Comments are screened, anon posting is on, IP logging is off.